I have finished the second chapter of The Mighty Orange-Peel (sic) and I'm letting the text and the characters lie for a while. I hope to come back to it with a fresh pair of eyes and read the first two chapters along with the prologue to make sure the tone of voice is consistent and that the story not only flows but is engaging and, ultimately, is a good read.
In the mean time I'd like to introduce you to two old friends of mine. This is Jack and Alice, the main characters of my first picture book... Jack and Alice. They're fraternal twins who, over the course of their first book, explore the ups and downs of having to share. They learn that the benefits of having a partner in crime and loving each other far outweighs any of the draw backs. Here are a few of my favourite panels from the book